
This short story was written in response to Laura M Baileys Manic Monday prompt:
https://alltheshoesiwear.wordpress.com/2018/12/10/manic-mondays-3-way-prompt-naughty-or-nice/
Last week I wrote a parody christmas song, see here:
This weeks story is also inspired by the following word prompts:
https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2018/12/10/rdp-monday-ripple/
https://onedailyprompt.wordpress.com/2018/12/10/your-daily-word-prompt-sacred-december-10-2018/
https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2018/12/10/enrapture/
https://thehauntedwordsmith.wordpress.com/2018/12/10/daily-writing-challenge-dec-10/
Hotel, breakfast, caught
Who’s Been a Naughty Boy Then?
As I opened the door of the hotel room, I caught a glimpse of movement. A dainty foot slithered over the satin sheets, making a ripple.
I realised, with some embarrassment, that I had intruded upon a sacred moment. The couple beneath the covers were enjoying that moment of enrapture.
There was no ‘Do not disturb’ sign over the door handle to indicate that this was an inopportune, special moment.
I put the tray down on the side table and shouted “Breakfast” then ran quickly from the room.
Gosh, you really do see it all in the hotel trade, but I never expected to see Santa Claus and the Toothfairy enjoying each other’s company.
What would Mrs Clause Say?
Well, surely that must place him at the very top of his Naughty list this year!
Copyright: Kristian Fogarty 10/December/2018
ha ha ha ha great one!
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Thank you, It was all in the words, I blame them for my naughty tale.
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Santa Claus and the Tooth Fairy. An odd couple for sure!
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That is yet another great twist! Really good.
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HAha, Thank you. You didn’t see it coming then? 😉
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No really not. I always look forward to the twist in the end.
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You know I can’t resist a final twist 😉
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Coal in his stocking. Both stockings 🙂
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Yes, Indeed. I expect he may need surgical stockings when Mrs Clause finds out (and quite right too).
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Probably Santa had lost lots of teeth from eating all those cookies and milk, and that’s how he met the fairy. Carrot sticks and water for him this Christmas, for sure!
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That’s it she’ll doing anything for teeth! lol. 😉
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Excellent, who would have thunk it!!
However it reminds me of a similiat moment in the Cotteridge hotel in Woking in 1981!! Not those two, but three others – awkward!!
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Not Snap, Crackle and Pop! I’ll never eat rice crispies gain.
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Ha ha 🙂
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Oops 🙊
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Look like Sants has got himself a side piece
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Haha, Indeed 😉
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