This poem was written for Kira’s Sunday Scribbles:
https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2019/02/24/kiras-sunday-scribbles-31/
They say the grass is greener
On the other side
But I cannot seem to get there,
And God knows, I’ve tried.
A couple of times I’ve managed
To climb the wall and see
But then I lose my balance,
And fall back into misery.
I’ve sat and thought
The issue through
And now I know
Just what to do,
Instead of climbing walls
And having falls
I’ll try something else instead
I’ll try to reverse the way I look
And get inside my head.
If I can act more positively
To change my own green space,
I won’t have to try to climb at all.
Or fall so far from grace.
It will not cost so much,
Not more than I can afford,
If I made my world more beautiful,
Then I won’t have to go abroad.
Copyright: Kristian Fogarty 25/February/2019
https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2019/02/25/act/
https://onedailyprompt.wordpress.com/2019/02/25/your-daily-word-prompt-abroad-february-25-2019/
Very cleverly done.
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Haha, Thank you (not like me at all 😉 )
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No , it’s just like. Very imaginative writing.
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🙂 You’re a star, thank you.
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My pleasure 😇
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Great flow. Great message. Very creative way to uplift a spirit. 🙂
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Thank you, That is just what I was hoping for. 🙂
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My pleasure, it was very well accomplished. 🙂
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Loved this!
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Thank you, Glad you liked it 🙂
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Loved this. Such a polished little piece!
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Well, Thank you very much. It came together nicely. I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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