Puddle-Jumping – A Limerick

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You said that it’s really auspicious
To jump in a puddle, I’m feeling judicious
Your language is such,
That I doubt it so much,
But then I’ve always been over suspicious.

 

Or

You said that it’s really auspicious

to jump in a puddle? I’m suspicious.

Your language is such,

that I doubt it so much,

I think your claim is purely fictitious.

 

So now I’m wondering which you think is best?

 

 

Copyright: Kristian Fogarty 27/February/2019

https://onedailyprompt.wordpress.com/2019/02/27/your-daily-word-prompt-auspicious-february-27-2019/

FOWC with Fandango — Puddle

https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2019/02/27/rdp-wednesday-language/

https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2019/02/27/wondering/

 

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12 thoughts on “Puddle-Jumping – A Limerick”

  4. How about this (feel free to discard my tweaking):

    You said that it’s really auspicious
    to jump in a puddle? ::Suspicious::
    Though your language is lush
    still I doubt it so much —
    As your claim is purely fictitious!

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