
You said that it’s really auspicious
To jump in a puddle, I’m feeling judicious
Your language is such,
That I doubt it so much,
But then I’ve always been over suspicious.
Or
You said that it’s really auspicious
to jump in a puddle? I’m suspicious.
Your language is such,
that I doubt it so much,
I think your claim is purely fictitious.
So now I’m wondering which you think is best?
Copyright: Kristian Fogarty 27/February/2019
https://onedailyprompt.wordpress.com/2019/02/27/your-daily-word-prompt-auspicious-february-27-2019/
https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2019/02/27/rdp-wednesday-language/
https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2019/02/27/wondering/
Well written!
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Thank you. I had fun.
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😃👍
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I like the rhythm the second one has… Nice flow! 😊
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Thank you. Yes, I wrote the first one quickly, then pondered a bit and wrote the second one. Maybe, it pays to think things through a bit before typing. 😉
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I tend to do that a lot. I hit publish, then say to myself… “Ah, shit!, I didn’t want that final product.” LOL! One day I’ll learn.
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Very nice! I like them both, but he second one sticks with me more 🙂
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Excellent, Thank you. I like the second one better too. 🙂
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My pleasure!
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How about this (feel free to discard my tweaking):
You said that it’s really auspicious
to jump in a puddle? ::Suspicious::
Though your language is lush
still I doubt it so much —
As your claim is purely fictitious!
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Haha, Could work 😉 A lot can come down to how you pronounce things.
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i went by syllables but yes you may say things differently 🙂
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