Cenote Cave in the Yukatan by mattiaverga at Pixabay.com
It was a beautiful spot; Couples arrived at the secluded pool through a candle-lit passage. He’d had to scout hard to find the opening at the top.
Since she’d rejected him, he’d planned his revenge. The click of the trigger echoed in that bowl-shaped hollow. So did the screams.
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This story was written for Kat Myrman’s Twittering Tales Challenge, see link below:
Twittering Tales #146 – 23 July 2019
I have also incorporated the following word prompts:
https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2019/07/23/rdp-tuesday-passage/
https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2019/07/23/scout/
Love this! ❤ well done! A great tale!
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Thank you, a bit gruesome, but that’s the fun of these 😉
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Well done!
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Thank you. 🙂 A bit dark 😉
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Every story and poem cannot be happy. 👍😃
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That’s true, it’s good to mix it up a bit. 🙂
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Yup! Absolutely.
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Ooh, the dark side of the Prompt King comes out. Very well done!!! 🤴🤗
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I like to bring out my dark side now and then, to make sure it doesn’t build up to dangerous levels 😉 lol
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Hmm? Good to know. I promise never to tick you off then. LOL! 😜 😝
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Haha, It’s the quiet ones you have to watch (and that’s not me 😉 )
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🤗LOL! Thank goodness for that news!
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Yikes! Beauty and freak out in so few words…👏👏
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Yes, it started so well and ended so gruesomly 😉
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I look forward to your gruesome tales. This one even had a touch of terror! Well done Kristian! 😊
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Oh! Thank you very much Kat. I look forward to your challenge every week. It’s nice to let the scary out in small doses 😉
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Haha! Isn’t that the truth! 😊
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You definitely went to the dark side on this one, Kristian!
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Mwahaha! Thanks Fandango. I think because the picture was so beautiful and serene, it made me want to turn that on its head and do something really dark. 🙂
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