Empty Gestures – A multiple word prompt poem.

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Empty Gestures

You gave me this new bracelet, but an empty gesture, this is,

When all I really wanted was your loving hugs and kisses,

You bought me some lovely things, a car, a diamond ring,

But when you are miles away from me, they don’t actually mean a thing.

I’m not being contentious, I’m not trying to agitate,

Next to your company, these objects are just inadequate.

I never asked for diamonds, or that pink Cadillac too,

It wasn’t things like that I loved so much, it was only you.

Yet here I sit in my new car, a bracelet around my wrist,

The diamond ring, the clothes, everything, just make a sorry list,

Of items that just show one thing, the empty gestures that you send,

When all I want is your time, your love, why can’t you comprehend?

copyright: Kristian Fogarty 20/August/2019


I have included the following word prompts:





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People are far too complicated to be able to describe in a few words so I am not even going to try.

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