And the words:
“How could I forget?” Mrs Judkin’s said. – Otherwise Engaged – Amanda Quick
They stood together on the bridge in Venice watching the traffic of boats and gondola navigate the grand canal.
It had been many years since their divorce and here they were face to face again. Venice held happy memories of times together on their honeymoon.
He looked at her, just as he had when they were young, a longing in his clear blue eyes. Gone was his brown hair, the man was no longer the slim guy she had once loved. She too had changed. She still had blonde hair, but that came out of a bottle now. She wasn’t quite as lithe and laughter lines and crow’s feet bedecked her face.
They laughed about old times.
“Did you marry again, after?” he asked nervously.
“Yes, I’m Mrs Judkins now” she replied.
“Oh, is your husband with you?” he responded, cautiously.
“No, he died two years ago.”
“You know, I never stopped loving you?” he said boldly.
“Really?” she said, moving closer.
“I can’t justify what I did, the affair I mean. You remember what happened?”
She smiled, in a winsome manner, then pushed him over the stone railing into the canal below.
“How could I forget?” Mrs Judkins said.
[200 Words]
This story was written for the 50 Word Thursday challenge which this week is hosted by Deb Whittam. Click below if you would like to take part, it’s not too late:
https://debbiewhittam.wordpress.com/2019/10/11/50-word-thursday-41/
I have also included the following word prompts:
https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2019/10/15/justify/
https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2019/10/15/rdp-tuesday-winsome/
Wholly cow!! Hilarious ending… Boy, I didn’t see that coming! Great writing, Kristian!!! Bravo!!!
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Thank you. I really enjoyed it, like I was having my own revenge! 🙂
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Aww, Revenge is so sweet! LOL! 🤗
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I guess she hadn’t forgiven him🤔😂🤣
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Maybe this will help ease her pain 😉
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And here I thought the romance was going to be rekindled! Great story Kristian.
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Haha, Thanks, Sadje. Maybe she’ll forgive him when they fish him out of the canal. 😉
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Maybe! If he is still repentant and not mad!😂
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That’s called getting your comeuppance. 🙂 Great tale Kristian
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Thanks, Deb. Yes, forgiveness only comes after retribution. 😉
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