

I wrote this poem the other day, but I have now added a final stanza that makes it a bit happier. I wished I could say that this poem is semiautobiographical, or at least the final bit, but I’m afraid it isn’t.
Cupid pulled back his bowstring
At his target, he took aim,
He hit me in my broken heart
Now I don’t feel quite the same.
It’s all a bit of a puzzle,
I’m not sure I feel so neat,
I don’t seem to sleep so well at night
And I can’t bring myself to eat.
I’m staring at adversity,
And productive, I am not,
Cupid! Why did you do this to me?
It was a cruel malicious shot.
For while you shot me well and good,
And my heart is now a flutter,
You didn’t bother to make a match
My love lies in the gutter.
So, Cupid please, get off your knees
And have another go,
Either cure me of this love disease
Or send me my Romeo.
And the new bit…
Cupid, you’re a splendid bloke,
For services, you should be knighted.
Because despite my fears and anguished tears,
My love turns out to be requited.
Copyright: Kristian Fogarty 21/July/2019 updated 24/July/2019
I have included the following word prompts:
https://ragtagcommunity.wordpress.com/2019/07/21/rdp-sunday-puzzle/
https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2019/07/21/target/
FOWC with Fandango — Productive
https://onedailyprompt.wordpress.com/2019/07/21/your-daily-word-prompt-adversity-july-21-2019/
https://wordofthedaychallenge.wordpress.com/2019/07/24/unrequited-2/
Lol Kristian!
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Glad you liked it. 😉
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Good one Kristian!😂
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Thank you. It came from the heart 😉
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A pleasure!
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Bravo!!! Well done, King of Prompts! 😁 🏹👑🤴
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Thank you [takes a bow] 😉
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… and the crowd goes wild!!! LOL!
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excellent! 🙂
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The gods always did have twisted senses of humor. Well done!
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😉 Thank you, glad you liked it.
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Great post 🙂
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Thank you. 🙂
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No problem 🙂 check out my blog when you get the chance 😄
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Oh, OK. 🙂
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I like your quick, witty poems like this one. 🙂
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Thank you, Chelsea, I appreciate that. Glad you liked it. 🙂
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This is a cute, witty little poem in the age of (sometimes boringly) heavy poems.
I liked this stanza in particular :):)
For while you shot me well and good,
And my heart is now a flutter,
You didn’t bother to make a match
My love lies in the gutter.
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Thank you very much. I’m glad you enjoyed my little poem. 🙂
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Oh yes, we love a happy ending 🙂
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Yes, so do I. I wish life could have more of them. 🙂
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❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ I love every bit of your poem, Kristian.
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Fantastic, thank you, Li. I really appreciate your lovely feedback. 🙂
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You are very welcome, Kristian, your poem was lovely.
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You’ve put me in a good mood to go to work in, Thanks Li. 🙂
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🙂
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Ha ha excellent Mr K 🙂
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Thanks, Rory 🙂
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Hey Kristian pleasure 🙂
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Just because it hasn’t happened YET, doesn’t mean it won’t. Patience…💌
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Thank you 🙂
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