50 Word Thursday #94 – A frantic escape.


Her plan was unravelling before her eyes. She thought no one would find her if she crawled to the back of the luggage compartment and hid behind the suitcases but Someone saw and called the guards.

She screamed causing a big fracas in order to escape. She ran the whole length of the train and could feel her heart pumping. Then, she had no where else to run, it was chilling but there was only one way.

She reached the door, threw it open, and, as the train picked up speed, she leapt out.

Next time she’d buy a ticket.

[100 words]

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People are far too complicated to be able to describe in a few words so I am not even going to try.

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